Saturday, October 13, 2007

Truly Invisible [55 word story final]

He woke up invisible, not being heard, smelled, or touched. Truly invisible. For the first time he felt whole, calm, aware. Suddenly, her voice seething into him, he began to gravitate towards her.

He remained in her room until his skin was dust and cobwebs were his organs. He would always be in her memory.

1 comment:

LazyRebel said...

cooper, you are such a great writer. i mean, once i let your words sink in it just gives me a feeling like i'm still in that world that great writing brings me...but not quite. i did a crappy job of explaining that but you can ask me later if you really care. awesome story.