Hey your play is awesome. I like how it is very poem-ish and but still very much a play at the same time. The imagery you used was really cool too. My favorite line is, "When I moved towards them they started to emit these strange and lovely sounds, like hearing a love story in a language you will never understand. And I just felt compelled to keep moving towards them, they were pulling at my chest, pulling like-" --I think it perfectly describes his feelings and the situation..very nice job!!
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I'm hungry too, what's for lunch?
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Hey your play is awesome. I like how it is very poem-ish and but still very much a play at the same time. The imagery you used was really cool too. My favorite line is, "When I moved towards them they started to emit these strange and lovely sounds, like hearing a love story in a language you will never understand. And I just felt compelled to keep moving towards them, they were pulling at my chest, pulling like-" --I think it perfectly describes his feelings and the situation..very nice job!!
Wow so I totally put this in the wrong post---dumb dumb dumb...I'll go put in the right one now!! Sorry!
Lol it's fine. An understandable mistake.
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