tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4411001736609393822.post8839820692365766875..comments2023-11-05T04:44:11.806-08:00Comments on an alright beginning: Raw Material for a pieceCooperhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11798205868864337188noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4411001736609393822.post-34246551800834789582009-01-06T08:10:00.000-08:002009-01-06T08:10:00.000-08:00This is brilliant, Cooper.The way you incorporate ...This is brilliant, Cooper.<BR/>The way you incorporate the reader into a glimpse of the writing process, perhaps. Like you're taking them along for the ride. It's such a different, detailed approach carried out quite well with the ending weaving about and wrapping it all up so nice and neat...<BR/><BR/>It gives a melancholic and haunting vibe. And it makes me wish I knew this man, what deferred him from his path of hope and what I could do to save him. I feel like we all know this man in a minimal sense.pfffitsLauren.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00984468834481295161noreply@blogger.com